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Xora of Lightmoon

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Yes, her name is pronounced exactly like Zora's, but she's a completely different character. This Xora is a vampire and part of the Lightmoon team, though she won't be introduced in the comic until a few issues in. She's newly turned, so she isn't in tuned with her new abilities yet and needs help from Lightmoon to get used to them.

Obviously, the image isn't finished yet. Just a up to get a little feedback.
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Boobs!

Sorry. Well, like the Zora pic, she looks a little too stiff. Proud, yes, but still a little stiff. Also, the single-colouredness (word?) of the hair doesn't match well with the shadows and highlights on her suit. I recommend highlights on the hair, not that I'm good with that either. But you encouraged critique...
Other than that, it's quite good. I could point out anatomical innacuracies, but I won't for two reasons:
1. I'm in no way one to talk.
2. The way you've drawn her body suits the cartoonish style you've used to draw her. Trying for more realism would ruin the effect. So I won't chide.
I'll have a look when it's finished though! She looks tough!

D-M